Fun Club

Fun Club

Pencil and paperOnline interactive
Overview
Using this Resource
Connecting to the Curriculum
Marking Student Responses
This task is about writing information to fill out a form.
balloon_fun_party_celebration.jpg
Imagine there is a new fun club and you want to join.
Fill out the form to join Fun Club.

Question 1Change answer

My Name:
My Address:
My Phone No.
My Age:
 

Question 1Change answer

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:

Question 1Change answer

A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
Task administration: 
This task can be completed online or with pencil and paper.
Level:
2
Curriculum info: 
Keywords: 
Description of task: 
For this NEMP task students are required to fill out a form to join a Fun Club.
Curriculum Links: 
Links to the Literacy Learning Progressions for Writing:
This resource helps to identify students’ ability to:
  • generate content that is relevant to the task
as described in the Literacy Learning Progressions for Writing at: http://www.literacyprogressions.tki.org.nz/The-Structure-of-the-Progressions.
Learning Progression Frameworks
This resource can provide evidence of learning associated with within the Writing Learning Progressions Frameworks.
Read more about the Learning Progressions Frameworks.
Answers/responses: 

Scoring:

  

Y4 (10/1998)

1 mark
1 mark
1 mark
1 mark


3 marks
2 marks
1 mark
0 mark


2 marks
1 mark
0 mark

phone number given
age given
indicated what would like to do
included appropriate question

Overall clarity and legibility:
excellent
very good
adequate
poor

Detail/comprehensiveness:
very good
good
poor

Total Score
7-9
5-6
3-4
0-2

97%
97%
98%
82%


16%
44%
32%
8%


29%
50%
21%


56%
33%
9%
2%

COMMENTARY: Year 4 students had considerable success filling in this form.

 

 

Examples

High Range

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
Play Games like soccer, ruBgy, golf. Eat Party food like Pie's, cake's, PoPcorn, icecream.
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
Does it cost any money to get in.

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
Go to fun places e.g lollypops
Go to the Swimming pools
Go to the movies
Go to McDonalds
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
Do we celeabruit peoples bithdays?

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
go to the local swimming pool and do art and craft
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
how many people are in the fun club at the moment?

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
Get together an go to the hot pools
Do activities using codes, compass', and maps
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
Do we go on day trips?

 

Mid Range

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
Swim, read, partys, fishing, stay up, late, scary story's in the dark.
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
Can you do every thing you, want.

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
Swim, draw, roller blade, write, read. lear about dears.
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
how dears are skined.

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
play sprots
have a party
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
what is a fun club

Things I would like to do at Fun Club:
swimming playing righting
A question I want to ask about Fun Club:
How many people are there