Bike for sale
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Further Resources
This task is about writing an advertisement to sell a bike.
Task administration:
This task can be completed with pencil and paper or online.
Levels:
2, 4
Curriculum info:
Key Competencies:
Keywords:
Description of task:
For this NEMP task students look at a picture of a bicycle and write an advertisement to sell the bike in a newspaper column.
Curriculum Links:
Links to the Literacy Learning Progressions for Writing:
This resource helps to identify students’ ability to:
- choose effective content, language, and text structure
- generate content that is relevant to the task
as described in the Literacy Learning Progressions for Writing at: http://www.literacyprogressions.tki.org.nz/The-Structure-of-the-Progressions.
Learning Progression Frameworks
This resource can provide evidence of learning associated with within the Writing Learning Progressions Frameworks.
Read more about the Learning Progressions Frameworks.Answers/responses:
| Y4 (10/1998) | Y8 (09/1998) | |
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Details indicates bike for sale refers to condition/type/features of bike price mentioned contact phone number or address indicated Effectiveness of advertisement:(persuasiveness) highly effective moderately effective slightly effective not effective |
81% 71% 58% 47%
4% 27% 40% 29% |
98% 93% 71% 70%
17% 41% 33% 9% |
Diagnostic and formative information:
Commentary
The most common omission was information about how to contact the seller. About 60% of Year 8 students and 30% of Year 4 students produced an advertisement rated moderately or highly effective.
Examples
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For Sale!
1 red Scott Peak bike!
Only 3 months old!
21 gears!
Includes drink bottle holder.
Adjustable seat and bars.
For sale for $110 If you are interested, please contact name on phone no.
(YEAR 8)
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Bike For Sale! ! !
10 speed, SCOtt, front and back brakes; etc.... exellent condition
2 years old hardly used.
Only $500
PH: phone no.
(YEAR 8)
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I want to sell a red Scott Mountain bike with J-bars and drink\ holder.
It also has a light and 21 gears.
It looks like new and is about $500.
(YEAR 8)
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BIKE For Sale
A bike is going to on sale on Sunday it is going to be infront of a white creamy garrage in wellington.
It has two lights that turn on orange. And it has a spechal spechal drink holder.
It costs 100 dollars. It will be on sale from Sunday to the next week. It takes eftpos.
And we could hold onto it untill you pay or keep if you pay and when you want to get it you can.
(YEAR 4)
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