Two short poems

Two short poems

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This task is about writing poems using alliteration (words that start with the same letter).

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Below are two short poems.

Playful
Puppies
Pounce
Perfectly



adjective
noun
verb
adverb
  Slippery
Seals
Slither
Slowly



adjective
noun
verb
adverb
a) Use the spaces below to write a poem like the poems above. Remember to use alliteration and use the correct kind of word (like an adjective). The noun "cats" has been put in for you.
 
adjective
noun
Cats verb
adverb

Question 1Change answer

b) Use the spaces below to write another poem like the poems above. Remember to use alliteration and use the correct kind of word (like an adjective). Choose one of these letters to start the words in your poem:
B    M    D
 
adjective
noun
verb
adverb
Task administration: 
This task can be completed by pen and paper or online.
Level:
3
Curriculum info: 
Description of task: 
This task assesses students' ability to provide examples of different parts of speech (noun, verb, adjective, adverb) in the context of writing two four-word alliteration poems.
Curriculum Links: 
This resource can be used to help to identify students’ ability to create texts to meet the writing demands of the New Zealand Curriculum.
 
Links to the Literacy Learning Progressions for Writing:
This resource helps to identify students’ ability to:
  • create content that conveys ideas relating to the topic
  • use vocabulary that clearly conveys ideas

as described in the Literacy Learning Progressions for Writing at: http://www.literacyprogressions.tki.org.nz/The-Structure-of-the-Progressions .

Learning Progression Frameworks
This resource can provide evidence of learning associated with within the Writing Learning Progressions Frameworks.
Read more about the Learning Progressions Frameworks.
Answers/responses: 
   

Y7 (02/2002)

a)

  • The first word is an adjective.
  • The third word is a verb.
  • The fourth word is an adverb.
  • All words begin with the same letter.
  • The verb forms are consistent, that is, the poem makes grammatical sense, e.g., "Cute Cats Climbs Carefully" would not get this mark.

very easy
very easy
moderate
easy
moderate

b)

  • The first word is an adjective.
  • The second word is a noun.
  • The third word is a verb.
  • The fourth word is an adverb.
  • All words begin with the same letter.
  • The verb forms are consistent.

very easy
very easy
very easy
moderate
easy
easy

Diagnostic and formative information: 
Common error
a) Instead of writing an adverb as the last word in this poem
13% of students wrote an adjective,
7% of students wrote a noun, and
6% of students wrote a verb.
b) Instead of writing an adverb as the last word in this poem
22% of students wrote an adjective,
19% of students wrote a noun, and
13% of students wrote a verb.